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When you wander through the forest
So perfect and white,
I want you to know it was me
Who was working all night
So I could bring you the snow
That makes you smile
And so you would know
I stopped and stayed a while
And I want you to know
That when I’m flying around
And bringing snow days to other small towns
I never stop thinking of your beautiful eyes
And how you never pay attention to the world’s vicious lies.
Because you are my snowflake,
My diamond in the snow.
And I think about you
Wherever I go.
And even though I can see you
But you still can’t see me
I will be hopeful
That someday you’ll believe.
Because when you do
I will hold on to you tight
And I will hold on to you
For the rest of my life.
So I will wait patiently.
Because you see
You are worth waiting for
And my princess you’ll be.
So when you are frightened
At night in your bed
Please think of these words
And rest your tired head.
Because the day is coming soon
When invisible I will no longer be.
But for now I will wait.
I will wait patiently.
Its Poetic time! Come on grab your friends! Were going to very distant lands.....
Teehee. I couldnt resist! It only took me four minutes anyway '3'
I got a request for a poem that sounded like it was written by Jack frost, so here ya go!:) If you guys have any other requests, please tell me! I can get poems like this done in under 5 minutes, and I love to write them! So comment!!!! I will make more If you request!:)

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The lovely :icongolden-apple-ribbon: Made a lyric video with my poem here: [link] :) Thanks, sweet!
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lunauroac125 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2015
Omg that was amazing
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mirathomson Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Awwe
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Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful!
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MoonGoddessRein Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student Artisan Crafter
Aww I liked it
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KagerouJo Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
Can I sing this? (Or make a song cover with someone else?)
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angelfabeth Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is so beautiful :') I can't express how amazing and touching this is <3 Could you do one about Jack's years alone?
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:iconhannahjanelee:
Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
I usually dont take requests, but you know what, I think I will. Ive been wanting to write something like this again!;) Thanks!
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:iconangelfabeth:
angelfabeth Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're welcome!
I can't wait to see what you come up with ;) I've also been planning something like that so you could check it out when I publish it if you want :)
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Tell me when its done;) I would love to see it! 
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:iconangelfabeth:
angelfabeth Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sure! I've been writing it in a notebook and drawing a picture to go with it, but recently it's gone missing, so it might take a while :(
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Thedimensiontravel Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
A beautiful Lullaby, definitely one i won't forget.
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thank you! :heart: 
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Thedimensiontravel Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013
You are very welcome.
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
This i so lovellyyy~ love Jack Frost >///< Great job!
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks!:)
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xxatouchofrostxx Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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Golden-Apple-Ribbon Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ok! GOT IT YEEAAAHHHH!!! IM DONE!! here ya go = w =

[link]

SO SORRY FOR DA WAIT ; A ; i hope u like it ^^
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
That was so cute! :iconaawplz:
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Golden-Apple-Ribbon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
aww thanks haha ^^ im glad u liked it ^^
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KrystalDreams14 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Hey, can you please tell me the name of the song that you used in this... please?!?! :please:
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Golden-Apple-Ribbon Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sure! its called Hijo de la Luna ^^[link] -->this is a good video with that song XD

and i made another one before with Jack in it too:
[link]
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CrystalChell Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I love it :iconiloveyouplz:
And I happen to be born into winter :D
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Golden-Apple-Ribbon Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol same!! n i adore winter n Jack Frost!!
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CrystalChell Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:dummy: Yay! :D
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:iconhannahjanelee:
Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
I was born in the opposite of winter, July. What rotten luck.
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:iconcrystalchell:
CrystalChell Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD well I wouldn't say that exactly because well....of Bunny so, hey, theres still some luck there :meow:
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Bunny :3
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:iconcrystalchell:
CrystalChell Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yep! ^w^ who doesn't love an over-sized rabbit that can talk? XD
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:iconhannahjanelee:
Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
A very toned Australian rabbit that can talk. :heart:
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:iconcrystalchell:
CrystalChell Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD lol, so true!
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MyEternalNight Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013
just wanted to let you know I tear up a little inside everytime I read this poem :iconrlytearplz:

I've probably read it like a hundred times already xD
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
teehee! Thank you! :3
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Mayvi Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
wowow, this is great.
It's sad....But also really romantic :)
I almost got teary eyed..
Great job!
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!:)
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Kirei-19 Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This just made my day. You, seriously, are awesome! :D
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much! :3
and if you like my work, I am currently writing a RotG fanfiction if you would like to check it out! ;)
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Corrynfrost14 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
It's lovely aahhh I lurrvvve it lolz
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Sigh. This poem brings me so much joy. :iconrainbowtearplz:
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ChibiSweets Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012
This is amazing!! Is there a melody for this? If not, can I make one up?
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I have already set it to music if that is what you are asking:) But, if you do make a melody for it then you have to give me the credit for the words and overall poem, with a like to either my Page or this deviation.
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ChibiSweets Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Alrighty!!
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handcuffs4ever Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh. My. Gosh... I just started crying! This is soooooo so so so beautiful!!! :iconcraiplz:
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!
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handcuffs4ever Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! :iconhappytearsplz:
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome more! :iconrainbowtearplz:
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handcuffs4ever Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:iconcryingrainbowsplz:
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SnowPrincess15 Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You made me shed a tear... this is so beautifull~
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Really? Thank you so much! :iconcryforeverplz:
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truehero10 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012
So wonderful~ :D I rarely heard about Jack Frost in my childhood (I only heard his name from Ed, Edd n Eddy's Jingle Jingle Jangle when Jonny cosplayed himself as Jack Frost) because it doesn't snow here~ But since this movie comes out, I start to know about him, and I realise that he had impressed my family and I by giving my family the first snow fall at Beijing (when I wasn't born yet). Till now, we always want to have a snow day (but not too cold)~ So I believe in him~ ;)
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I am in the midst of a blizzard right now that has been going for a few days and still going strong. It is kind of hard not to believe in him.
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