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If you can hear me
Because I have a feeling you're there
I want you to hear my winter song
So you will know I care

So here it goes,
I have nothing to lose
So I will sing my winter song
And I will sing it to you.

I know its Jack Frost
Who paints my windowpanes
And I know you are there
When I’m playing winter games.

I know that you bring the snow
That makes all of us smile
And I know that you linger
And watch us a while.

I know that you make
The icicles on each tree
Your beautiful work
Isn't over looked by me.

So if you are listening,
I want you to know
That I wanted to thank you
For the beautiful snow.

I know that others
May not be as faithful as me
But you should never feel doubtful
Because I will always believe.

So please never feel alone, dear Jack
Because you are my guardian true
And I want you to know
I will always believe in you
This is the song from my Jack FrostXReader fanfiction, I thought I would post it separately as well.

I wrote it all, and I set it to music by myself. The link will be posted to the music video soon, but for now Its just a pretty little poem;)

This is the longer version, and the one in my story is shorter. It may not flow perfectly, but that is because they are song lyrics, and therefore set to a beat where the words do flow nicely.

Please comment! I love to hear your thoughts! :)

Here is the link to my Jack FrostXReader (Frosted Kiss) if you haven't read it yet: [link]
And here is the link to more Jack Frost Poetry by me: [link]
Song lyrics (c) :iconhannahjanelee:
RotG (c) Dreamworks
You (c) Yourself

Edit: Holy. Fudgebuckets. I cannot believe how many views and favorites this thing has gotten! I wake up and Its on the front page of literature! WTC? *Passes out dramatically* THANK YOU SO MUCH! You guys are so amazin!!! I never expected this! Thank you guys so much! :iconoldschoolownedplz:
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satansoul5971 Featured By Owner May 20, 2015
:tardclap: This is very good.
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HetaliaRules99 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is so amazing!!!!!!!
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Zeldaloverrrrrrrr Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It's great!
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bordercolliesRULE Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*the*
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bordercolliesRULE Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Omg I sang this last night and I got snow to next morning no joke
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Cool!!!!!!!! :)
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MetalJacksonFire Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
youu!! Creative one!!! <---aparently Anger xD :dance: nice song xD
why why!! xD jst kidn
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks
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:iconmetaljacksonfire:
MetalJacksonFire Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
welcome!
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roses21 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Photographer
good song great on hard work =)
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:iconhannahjanelee:
Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!:)
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:iconmayvi:
Mayvi Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is great! Really sweet.
I believe in Jack. <3
Do you :3?
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:iconhannahjanelee:
Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
Doesn't everybody? :3
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allybacon Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Holy. Fudgebuckets. :heart: I love your Jack Frost poem, so sweet! :iconaawplz:
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:iconhannahjanelee:
Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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allybacon Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no problemo :iconcuteplz:
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:iconkickasstiel:
Kickasstiel Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww! I love it.
Hello Hannah, by the way.
*twin high five*
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:iconhannahjanelee:
Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
And Hello!:) *Returns high five with much gusto*
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EscargotLuverz Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
*You're
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Avizo-23 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
i like it! it's sooo cute, if jack frost could read this (or you read it to him ;)) i'm pretty sure it'll make his day :D aaaaawwwwww!!!
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awww thanks:)
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KooriAkuma Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student Writer
I think this is going to be one of those songs that get stuck in my head and that I will be singing it for a very, very long while X3
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Teehee:) Im working on it right now!
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milkstar-enganderp Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Student General Artist
I LOVED THE FAN FIC, NOW THE SONG MAKES IT EVEN BETTER. :iconfanboyingplz:
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much!:)
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Nouchie Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
This is great! I enjoyed reading this! :heart:

I hope this doesn't bother you,

but on the second line of the first stanza,
if you are trying to say "you are there"
"your" should be "you're"
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!

And I appreciate the corrections:)
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Internal-Flame13 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
really cant wait for the music. I remember reading the fic and singing out loud. That fic really hit home cuz its really in character for me.personaly. I would love to hear the.music for it and possibly do a cover ^w^ sorry rambling. Love the song and th fic
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Aw thank you! I would love to hear your cover;)
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Internal-Flame13 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
When I know the music Ill gladly do a cover, all credits to you of course.
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!:) Ill send you the link as soon as possible.
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Internal-Flame13 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconinternal-flame13::iconthanksplz:
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Ohmygoodness. Is that a princess tutu icon I see??? :icondeanspazplz:
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Internal-Flame13 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol yes it is! You know of PTT?
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:iconhannahjanelee:
Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Do I know Of PTT? DO I KNOW OF PTT?
Chickita please. I love off of it.
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Uzu-Jamake Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Wow I really love this! I'm sure it explains how a lot of people are feeling lately,especially me :)

I can't wait to hear the music video! I'm sure it'll be beautiful! <3
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, Thank you so much:)
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Uzu-Jamake Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Student Digital Artist
You're very welcome! :)
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Golden-Apple-Ribbon Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
GHDYUWGWYUWDGD I LOVE THIS~~!!! ; W ; I WILL ALWAYS BELIEVE IN U JAAACCKKK!!! T v T
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconsqueeeeplz:
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Golden-Apple-Ribbon Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
YYUPYUPYUPYUPYUP!!!! XD
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truehero10 Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013
Aww, it's so nice~ Awesome! :D
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :)
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ExiledFantasy Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That's really awesome!! Good job! Although loose should be lose. XD
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:iconhannahjanelee:
Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Good grief. I cannot spell for my life, and my computer is crappy at catching everything-__-
Thank you!:)
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ExiledFantasy Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
It's fine, it's just a common mistake even I make sometimes, which gets me in a little trouble with my English teacher since I'm in an advanced class. eAe I guess I picked the correcting thing up from there..


But seriously, you should keep writing more of these. You're very good. C:
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Hannahjanelee Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Im taking a few of writing classes myself. Im not failing because I cannot write, Im failing because I suck at spelling! XD

Thank you very much!:)
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ExiledFantasy Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohhhhhh? XD Well Im sure you'll improve in time. C:
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